Expository+Writing

What is your favorite song?

I love to listen to the song on my IPod. My favorite song is called "Rude Boy". It’s the best song out right now! 

First, my favorite is "Rude Boy" because it is made by my favorite singer (Rihanna). She is my favorite singer, because she has a great voice when she sings. When she is on TV, or saying a joke she can make people laugh. When she comes out in public she always has on pretty clothes.

Second, my favorite song is "Rude Boy" because I like the beat. The beat of the song is slow. The beat of the song is very catchy. The beat of the song is rough. 

Third, my favorite song is "Rude Boy" because it tells about boys. I like how it says boys are crazy. I like how the song says the boys are silly. I like how the song says the boys are funny. 

Finally, my favorite song is "Rude Boy" because it is sung by my favorite singer, I like the beat of the song, and it tells how the boys act in real life, and I know all of the lyrics to the song. What is your favorite song?

If I was stranded on a deserted island I would bring water.

I would hate to be stranded on an island by myself. I would bring water if I were stranded on a island by myself. That is what keeps me going.

First, I would bring water on the island to survive. If I survive I cuold find my way back. If I survive I could keep moving. If I survive I could make it back in time to see my family.

Second, I would bring water on the island if I get thristy. If I get thristy I could drink some water. If I get thristy I could save some water for later. If I get thristy I could drink the water and I won't die.

Third, I would brng water to the island to stay awake. If I stay awake I could want to see if someone comes. If I could stay awake I could get directions and go the right way. If I could stay awake I could get a ride to somewhere safe.

Finally, I would bring water so I could survive,if I get thristy,and so I could stay awake. What would you bring on a deserted island.